The Process of Decay
The process of decay must mirror
some behavior of the universe,
sidewalk chalk and dead snakes,
left in muggy air to get bloated and
gradually to decrease in amplitude
deteriorate or become impaired
deteriorate or become impaired
have patterns reflected in other
processes. So does decay have
processes. So does decay have
certain choice, then skip to a kitchen
just to reach for the bucket on top
of a fridge with no power: the pipes
have no water: thus a bucket
of fluid on an empty utility
the building to be destructed
first the power and water were
disconnected to prevent explosions
one could hypothetically meander
pondering “what sort would leave a
building so stable alone and un-purposed?”
choose to stay, not noticing the windows
had been pried off and trucked away.
then the siding stripped (maybe this is not
how to deconstruct a building)
to lose its characteristic quality,
strength, or excellence; do the ghosts of
snowpeople that shrunk to muddy shadows
snowpeople that shrunk to muddy shadows
haunt us? to be in a failing condition.
reflections of trees in puddles that evaporate.
reflections of trees in puddles that evaporate.
A grandfather who was so magnetic his
watches lost their delicate accuracy.
watches lost their delicate accuracy.
The blackboards are only really clean for
the first few moments of a lecture, dead
the first few moments of a lecture, dead
sea creatures layering to be smeared
with eraser. When a banana decays, the
with eraser. When a banana decays, the
most fragile or maybe vulnerable portions
get weathered away first, how a skeleton
get weathered away first, how a skeleton
is what we dig out of mass graves and
not just empty skin with all the insides
disappeared and recycled to become
matter in a wooden chair from IKEA
that took all day to assemble because
operating on only pictorial instructions
operating on only pictorial instructions
may leave you with too many screws
or an extra plank. Even this process
puts things together in an order that leads
to pieces made of pieces, like a skull
of a tyrannosaurus has several bones,
connecting to several in the neck,
wearing feathers and probably a great
deal more silly than given credit for by
action figures. falling off from a prosperous
or thriving condition; progressive decline;
or thriving condition; progressive decline;
there is an order, a next
most reasonable choice to (de)construct
this building or banana: the living
of living may take another away
and it usually saves to buy in bulk.
So, after windows (I hope they are
taken to be reused and not shattered)
the condition of one who has thus fallen off
or declined. recycling costs energy
reusing costs a different energy,
reusing costs a different energy,
but octopi living in less murky waters
thank the woman who drives the fronthoe
thank the woman who drives the fronthoe
Not-A-Bulldozer for saving the windows
All the blackboards could be saved, if
anyone has use of them. what about the murals
that probably were not on the walls when you
consider the purpose of this building. Yet
the gradual decrease in the radioactivity
spontaneous transformation of a single atomic
nucleus/elementary particle into one or more
nucleus/elementary particle into one or more
different nuclei/particles. I would like to think
that all buildings get murals worthy of excising
that all buildings get murals worthy of excising
a wall to be reinstalled. “So much depends upon”
whether they wanted to reuse the handles
whether they wanted to reuse the handles
from all the doors, and the hinges, light
switches. Decaying bananas become
seeds eventually, but maybe not banana
seeds. I worry about the crushed frames.
I can follow this version of your poem a lot easier than the first one, although it is still kind of confusing. My favorite part of the poem is your discussion of specific types of garbage, like the IKEA furniture that you were unable to fully put together. I really enjoy how you brought the decaying banana back into the poem at the end because it brought it full circle and connected the beginning to the end.
ReplyDeleteI congratulate you for writing such a well constructed lengthy poem. The imagery of garbage seems to connect to your meaning of waste/decay. I also liked the "choice of decay," which gave your poem another layer of meaning. I think you lose me a bit where you say "but octopi living in less murky waters thank the woman who drives the fronthoe."
ReplyDeletethink maybe: for T-rex, to clarify, recent scientific rendering, ugly bird
ReplyDeleteAlthough the poem is a bit confusing, I do like the voice and imagery. The poem is very detailed almost crossing the line of overwhelming. I like the mention of a chalkboard is not really clean. The mention of octopus is a good random as well.
ReplyDeleteLove sidewalk chalk and dead snakes next to each other
ReplyDeleteLove the ghosts of snowpeople
Given credit for by action figures confusing
What are the octopi thankful for?
All of the different processes of decay make this a great opener for your portfolio
The first stanza is my favorite. It caused me to think about a lot of various aspects of my own life. However, I get a little confused towards the end and I feel that the poem is weaker in the last few stanzas. It starts out amazing, so maybe if there is a way you can keep the consistency throughout, the poem's flow will be enhanced. Overall a great poem!
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